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Cheryl Haggard
01-03-2008, 03:30 PM
This too, is what NILMDTS is all about. Please read this letter from a 16 year old girl. NILMDTS is really making a difference, even in the lives of those not personally touched by the loss of a child. Her words are a gift to all of us.


Dear Ms. Roe, Ms. Puc', and Ms. Haggard,

My name is XXXXXXX, I'm 16, I live in Highlands Ranch, and I'm a junior at Mountain Vista High School. I read the newspaper article about NILMDTS a couple days ago, although it was printed quite a while ago according to my dad, and I can't begin to tell you how much it touched me. I guess my dad had put it in my room some time ago, but he never said anything and I never saw it. Then, a couple days ago, I found it on my music stand. I think I’ve now read that article at least twenty times, and I still can’t keep from crying every single time. It may seem really odd that it has impacted me so profoundly, since I have definitely never been pregnant or had a child, but it has.

I think that part of why it is so moving is because of my sister XXXXX. She is now five years old, but when she was born I wanted nothing to do with her. It sounds so extremely childish now when I look back, but I hated my parents for her birth and for “ruining my life.” I despised her out of pure selfishness, and now, I cannot imagine a day without her. Watching her grow up and try so hard to be like her “big sissie” humbles me more than I ever thought it could, and it makes me so sad that the families that you help have had to say goodbye to that joy forever. I was selfish to wish her gone while there are so many who would give their very lives to have their little one back. I feel foolish for how I behaved 5 years ago, but also so thankful and blessed to have XXXXX in my life now.

Music is my passion. I love every part of it and it is how I express everything about myself and what I feel. After I read your article, I immediately sat down and wrote a song about the babies lost. I very rarely write an entire song in one sitting; I usually get stuck and have to keep coming back and writing more, but I was so filled with emotion after reading that I wrote the whole thing in 20 minutes. Trust me, it’s not perfect, and not even close to done, but the words are mostly there and they are straight from my heart. I play both guitar and piano, not extremely well on either, but well enough to accompany myself, and I’m working on parts for both. I have not yet shared the song with anyone, but I did tell my youth group leader at my church a little about the article and song and he asked if I would play it for our whole youth group and maybe even the whole church when it is finished. He said there are some in the church who have had to cope with losing a child in the past few years and it would be a wonderful thing to share. He told me to pray about it and take my time finishing the song and get back to him when I’m ready.

However, I would not feel comfortable performing the song without your permission. (I wasn’t exactly sure who to ask which is why I’ve emailed all three of you). The name of the song (at the moment) is “Treasured Forever.” The main line in the chorus is the name of your organization, but it says “Now I lay you down to sleep” instead of “me.” (I wrote the song from the perspective of the mother or father, so this was more appropriate). I’m asking for permission to use your name in the song and to perform it. If you would rather, I can re-write that line or not perform it at all. I definitely don’t want to do something you would not want.

Completely separate from the song, however, I simply want to thank you for all you are doing. I can’t imagine the pain you have felt, Mrs. Haggard, in losing your son, but what you have done to remember him and the way you have reached out to help others is inspiring. I’m sure the amount of time you all put into what you do is incomprehensible and probably physically exhausting, yet you keep going because you know what a precious gift your time is. You have made the pain for so many grieving families more bearable. You’ve given them their children. You, along with all of the volunteers, are truly incredible blessings from God. Thank you for everything you have done and are still doing.

Please know, that concerning the song, I completely understand if there is any reason you don’t want in done, and if it is so I will not lose any respect for you all whatsoever. Please tell me honestly whether or not it is OK.

Thank you again.

XXXXX

Tasha Nicholls
01-03-2008, 05:13 PM
Wow! That is so awesome! I hope she shares her song with us when she finishes it... I would love to hear it. :)

Tricia Hackney
01-03-2008, 05:15 PM
oh man - Crying again - imagine that!!! That is a beautiful letter!!

rsonnino
01-03-2008, 05:20 PM
Wow - we give teenagers too little credit these days. I would suggest that we ask her not only to share the song with us, but if we like it, ask her to authorize us to use it in our slideshows. In any case, kudos to NILMDTS, but also to this incredibly sensitive young lady.
Thanks for sharing!
Roberta

Kelly Story
01-03-2008, 07:46 PM
Wow!! What a special person and what a gift to the world.



Kelly

linda
01-03-2008, 08:12 PM
What an amazing young lady! I sure hope she'll finish the song and share it with us. And yes share with her that her youth pastor is right. Many, many parents would be so very blessed by her ministry of music in her church.

Cathy
01-03-2008, 09:28 PM
she must be one amazing young lady I would say girl but she seems way to grown up to be called a girl

carissa13
01-03-2008, 09:50 PM
WOW..... what a wonderful young lady!! I am bawling my eyes out right now! I am excited to hear her song and think it's very special that she has done something like that.

marylouise
01-04-2008, 12:41 AM
Isn't it amazing how many live's little Maddux has touched & changed!

JenniferBrown
01-04-2008, 01:45 AM
Wow - we give teenagers too little credit these days. I would suggest that we ask her not only to share the song with us, but if we like it, ask her to authorize us to use it in our slideshows. In any case, kudos to NILMDTS, but also to this incredibly sensitive young lady.
Thanks for sharing!
Roberta

I was about to post the same thing. I know that I want to hear it for sure and think if we could use it for slideshows would be such a honor. :) Let us know how that goes, Cheryl!

Estrella
01-04-2008, 02:03 AM
hmmmm...WOW seems to be the popular statement for the day, so why not! lol WOW!! What an amazing young lady...I too, hope that she will share this gift when it is finished...what a gift!

Aurora
01-04-2008, 02:22 PM
How awesome of her!!!

Hailey's Mommy
01-04-2008, 06:19 PM
That is just amazing!!! I would have never guessed that this letter came from a 16 year old. I would love to hear her song when complete.

Sandy Viola
01-04-2008, 11:02 PM
Wow, why can't we all get teenagers like her? :D Hope we get to hear her song!

Tammy
01-07-2008, 08:10 AM
Amazing young lady. I too, hope she would be willing to share her song with us.

Julie Williams
01-07-2008, 09:34 AM
Wow....what an amazing young lady! I really hope she shares it with everyone here too.

Thank you for sharing that with us!

Sharon Nord
01-07-2008, 12:47 PM
I too am anxiously awaiting the arrival of her song. What an incredible young lady - wise beyond her years.

Lindzy Foster
01-07-2008, 01:23 PM
this is inspiring, what a wonderful young woman!

Jordan
01-31-2008, 03:58 PM
How beautifully written....does anyone know if her parents have read it? How proud they must be.

Sara Chapman
02-19-2008, 02:37 AM
WOW.... how wonderful it is that God has given her a talent and that she has been touched and perhaps will be moved to allow her talent and her song to be used for the organization to help families. Does she realize the impact that SHE may have on this world??? I know that reading her words is an inspiration.

Beautiful!

Marcus Momma
02-19-2008, 02:39 AM
wow a teenager thinking like that is really surprising i'm glad to see there are still sweet teenagers that this world hasnt corrupted yet. I hope to here her song the first line of made me cry.

Lyssa Sauer
02-29-2008, 01:18 AM
Tears come to my eyes to know you have opened the eyes of yet another person and at such a young age. I would love to here her song...... What a wonderful young girl.

Dottie Di Liddo
03-22-2008, 09:31 AM
Oh my gosh! What a gift from God in that young lady. She is wise beyond her years and her compassion is so all encompassing.... Has her song been heard yet? I am very interrested in heariing this remarkable young woman's work of art. Dottie PS My tears are flowing!

linda
03-22-2008, 09:11 PM
Cheryl,

Has this young lady finished her song and has she been in touch to share it???

Christine Barrack
03-22-2008, 10:29 PM
Her heart has spoken and she has expressed this in such a mature manner. Beautiful soul she has. Looking forward to hearing the song as well.

linda
06-04-2008, 12:50 AM
Cheryl, Did she ever record the song and or send the lyrics???

Cheryl Haggard
06-05-2008, 12:49 AM
Linda, not yet.

Brandy
06-05-2008, 09:59 PM
I just read this and I'm now sitting here crying. What a grown up 16 year old.

charlene pabon lopez
06-08-2008, 01:06 AM
I think that was a great idea to write an article then to see responses and what a difference it makes in people lives... i'm very sure her little sister would also be just as moved as we all were... it was a great letter very moving...